Tuesday, January 8, 2008

Hidden Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.8

On the right day he held you close
Pouring out his love to you the most
The smile on your face shines like the sun
just warmth and comfort
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Tanequia t..
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Greenwolfe 1962 31 August 2008

This is a good example of what A writer can do with a pen when they want to. Use it for the benefit of others. A very well constructed piece of writing with a lesson as a bonus. Like a cracker jack box. GW62

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*~Kera ~* 15 January 2008

Very...Good...Poem... Nequa

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