Monday, November 9, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

We lived together, only so we could end apart
Not knowing this would happen from our very start
I believed we would be together as man and wife
Forever sharing our awesome, passionate life
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Deborah Cromer
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Nikunj Sharma 10 November 2009

there is so much life, so much truth and so much feeling in here. The poem speaks for itself.......the end is just superb, the hidden memory of a dream that still lives on.........that's what love is all about, to think, to long for, to dream and to anchor on to one's set of beliefs............Debbie.......I am running out of words of praise for your work...........send me some good adjectives.......please

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 November 2009

this one is very well written. Poetic. Very good.

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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