Hidden Comments

What a beautiful love poem. 'Ledge of love' suggests the extremity (edge) that we feel we are inhabiting emotionally and the precariousness, rationally, unfortunately. Linda H.

There we hang, right on the edge of knowing, understanding, bursting with the newness of it all. What a WOW feeling, and you expressed it so very well.

Lovely poem, lucky man! I especially liked these lines of your poem, 'Hidden'. My heart sings and burns It's a portrait of the dying sun in pink mist At the dawn of the sparkling moon The stars flecking and expanding The world turning, learning, yearning