Saturday, November 19, 2011

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Lies behind your eyes
Irritating, derelict and despicable
Why such lies you make
Stabs my heart, got hit by a dart
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Shayne De Vera
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 October 2013

this brings smooth glide of the words when pronounced esp the last line. and the intensity of your emotion is evident. Why don't you write anymore? Hope you are fine.

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