Saturday, March 3, 2012

Hickory-Dickory Dock! The Lonely Mouse Runs Up The Clock! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I saw imaginary masks walking along the streets in the Wolf Creek,
So I too wear a mask to hide my tears with a big smile plastic.
An absolute darkness is eating me, all I can feel is heebie-jeebies;
Yuk! I'm sucked deeper and deeper into a hole of screaming meemies!
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Adeline Foster 14 March 2012

Licentiousness? Well I don't know, but it sure does have its moments. Well done, you sure are getting better with English. Read mine - An Acutely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric - Adeline

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you will sort those glitches when I reedit my poetry 🙏🙏👍👍

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Martin O'Neill 04 March 2012

Harindhar, I admit to struggling with interpreting some of the English grammar here, but - the sheer unbridled joy and seeming licentiousness of this poem (unless I have completely misread it) is a delight. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Will sort all those glitches when I reedit my poems, thank you for your keen observations

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Dave Walker 03 March 2012

A really great poem, liked it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Stars In The Night.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm honoured by such a beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 03 March 2012

hey, what did you say about a harlequin? ...(joke) . this poem is a picture of your today`s mood. but time will pass and you`ll find your happiness in yourself first of all. The poem is great. I `ve told and will tell again I like your style of writing, your play with words. it is amazing.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for awesome running commentary on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm grateful for your amazing review 🙏👍

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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