Saturday, April 7, 2007

Hiccups In My Heart Comments

Rating: 3.5

I have hiccups in my heart
So say the doctors that are smart
A different syncopation
Not disrupting circulation
...
Read full text

JoAnn McGrath
COMMENTS
David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, don't hiccup out on us just yet. Another piece with a nice laid back slice of humour. Just what the Doctor ordered. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

0 0 Reply
Jamal Ludin 07 April 2007

the key word is hiccups -in poetic terms mean a lot-wonderful

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success