Monday, May 25, 2015

Hibiscus Hopes Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only I was given the destiny to see
when hopes are counted in one, two and three
the hourglass would spend all it has got
till I step in and out to be free
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Asma Khan
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Abdallah Gamal 03 August 2015

Wonderful, magnificent! ! ! This is one of the best poems I've ever read in my entire life. The rhythm and the rhyme twinkle in my ears. I only wonder why you chose Hibiscus? ! Keep up the good work! Rated +10 and published on my Facebook page :) Abdallah Gamal

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