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I really liked this! The way you portray it has a sort of surreal stroll.. and I love your unusual approach on the subject. The most un-morbid poem about Death I've read; P

Clearly...you have a wonderful imagination! To create a scene where death is not only welcomed...but cherished...is indeed very creative writing! ! Nicely done! Hugs, Dee

Commendable work, Donall.I like the contemporary abstract tone, as well as the single spaced versing...Solid Write, indeed... FjR

Commendable work, Donall.I like the smatter of the contemporary abstract tone, as well as the spaced versing...Solid Write, indeed... FjR

Commendable work, Donall.I like the smatter of the contemporary abstract tone, as well as the spaced versing...Solid Write, indeed... FjR