Oh my
LOVE deity,
Rock my world with beauty:
Your comely figure with imp-thin
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1.Wasp waist body in sleek apricot lemur blue round eyes, VERY METAPHORICAL POETRY MY SIX PLUS DECADES HAS TAUGHT ME LOVE WHEN IT IS DESIRED MOST BUT IS NAUGHT metaphorically.
Yet again a ravishing take on rhyme. I must say, I'm more intrigued by the rhythmic paradigm in your poems than the words themselves. You can be a wonderful songster.
A fascinating poem. Lovely and wonderful attributes of a beloved. Beautifully crafted with a lively flow.
beauty amazonian; kite of heart flying reel on the kissing lips for the entire life amorous fire with no death
Yup dear friend I do like to quote Keats " a thing of beauty is joy for ever"
2.Your three poems I have condensed hoping you will friendship cement You are a young man standing at the threshold of time AND I am about to ring the bell till it chimes For whom does the bell toll now who can tell ye smoulder with hypnotic passion and me getting off your thighs, glide to the end where two teak tall trees, live as wind blows! I bow down to your beauty