Saturday, March 5, 2016

Hi Comments

Rating: 4.4

without a hi
there is still a bye
people won't bother to ask why
since their world is the world 'i'
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Anne Yun
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Anthony Liccione 28 October 2017

sadly, this is the world we live in.. if the world were like you, we would have more Good Samaritan caring attitude.. a nice poem you wrote to touch the coldness of people's hearts.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2016

I omitted to add: Yes Anne, in order to welcome the world to you, you have keep the I aside. You have to be selfless. How True!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2016

Hi Anne, A wonderful exhortation to make one's life worthwhile living. It is when one opens one heart to others, when one shares that the world also responds.; the world becomes beautiful. So much of philosophy in so few words...10++

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2016

Just read the first poem of yours, posted on this site. It's a nice one. Saying hi to other people is a nice habit. Those who aren't busy in their own world of 'i', usually do it.

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Jeremy Horsford 09 March 2016

A nice little composition.

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Ernest Makuakua 08 March 2016

Hi Anne Yun i enjoyed reading your work keep those poems coming its beautiful nice work thanks for sharing

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Ryson Dsouza 05 March 2016

HI! ! ! ! very well writing... thanks for sharing, , ,10

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