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Oh! What a beautiful concept; what an exquisite piece of poetry! Loved reading. Congrats!

Wow- - I am in awe and wonder at this little poem.

excellent piece of work....

dear Anne, you're a talented poet.. I like your poetry very much This poem, short but brightly penned, is a little gem. Only one thing, maybe.. May I suggest just a little change? '' Ask no more the distance from dew to grass Nor the way leading twilight to moonlight When i begin searching for you My morning chases your night when you start talking to me Your sun kisses my stars goodnight ''

My morning is chasing your night - beautiful. I liked this line.

Your sun is kissing my stars goodnight //Ι can not find out the syntactical position and function of the wors ''goodnight'' here..It sound though quite nice.

That is nice., I read it once, I read twice, I read it thrice, and it was still nice. O. P.

morning chases the night. sun kissing the stars........ wonderful imagination. you are romantic. dev