Thursday, May 21, 2015

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I am yearning to see you once again
Wanting to sit quietly by your side alone,
Even if you don’t talk, it doesn’t matter,
I will keep myself deeply entranced
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Amitava Sur
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Kavya . 03 June 2015

the intensity of missing someone in our life is deeply hurt wen we feel the urge to want them back, sit with us, be with us and then fail to revive them. a very touchy poem.

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Alesia Leach 22 May 2015

Very personal, deep and sad. I enjoyed reading.

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Roseann Shawiak 21 May 2015

A beautiful and heart wrenching poem, Amitava! Such a delicate and tender love you have within for the love of your life, Rakhee. Anger peeking out for just a moment, showing your brokenness over losing her. No longer able to count the days, just missing and wanting her back. There are no pathways back to her and your sorrow continues to begin. Such a melancholic, but meaningful poem. Thank you for sharing your grief so gently. RoseAnn

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