Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Hey! That Jolly Good Fellow Who Works In A Gas Station Now. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The notorious scribbler who wants to change the sky
And replace a new Sun and Moon,
Stuck in a place where he provides fuel to the mischievous vehicles
That run on the slippery road.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 24 September 2007

Nimal this is a wonderful poem with a light heart and an eccentric theme. I love the way you mix the world of heavenly bodies with the hum drum of a gas station. A charming piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2007

As long as there are stars to wish on, hope is still alive. Praise for your gifted pen. Always your friend at poemhunter, Warm regards, Sandra

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David Tanguay 11 September 2007

good one Nimal, counting the stars

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