Saturday, March 12, 2016

Hey Bruce, Wait Up! Comments

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I can see him waiting for me at the gate
He is opening it for me
He is wearing jeans and a bright white athletic T -shirt
He is barefoot
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Elisabeth Wingle
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Bri Edwards 20 July 2016

beckoning. ;) i've never been beconed, have you? ok, i was going to make another suggestion, BUT i see this is a very serious poem, so i won't. have a nice reunion, Lisa. bri :)

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Elisabeth Wingle 21 July 2016

Bri, Tell me what else I needs to be edited. I've already shown you what a terrible speller I am.

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Wes Vogler 22 March 2016

Intriguing! Who is Bruce (Dern?) I like the term PROSE POEM You have a compelling form of writing. Me who does not approve of non-rhyming poetry I am unable to rate it except I like it

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Elisabeth Wingle 22 March 2016

Hi Wes, I am glad you liked this! It's based on a dream I had Bruce was my oldest brother he died of cancer 2 1/2 years ago I miss him terribly. He was a great guy,13 years older than I. He was not just a brother but a friend.

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