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We are blessed with a zillion three wheelers.
India is a country bursting with creative tinkers.
The chaps who ply them use them as 5 seaters.
Disney my darling, we have great mind spinners.
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a wonderful montage of the street scene you build for the reader. great job. The chaps who ply them use them as 5 seaters. i would avoid using the word them twice in the same line. bernie henrie
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7/28/2025 8:23:44 PM # 1.0.0
Thanks bernie. Appreciate your appreciation and your tip on words usage. I will try and keep that in mind. Cheers.