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A refined poetic imagination, Lee D. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Brilliant Work, young lady! So many wise, & strongly conveyed philosophies & mantras to heed to & live by, here.Stucturally flawless...You may curtsy, now...as i stand to applaud.Sterling effort! ~ FjcR ~

left me Speechless...one of ur great works Lee keep them comin and thanx for sharin koni

I'm going to take that final stanza around with me today. t x

once again, kapatid, this is beautiful!

nice the way the enjambment suggests the fast and fleeting nature of life, passing by before you know it, yet saying so much along the way. In the end, all i can comment is: A-men, Lee.

dear lee, you have a very clear mind. i love this poem especially that life itself has to be lived with a passion... that means, taking its pains, pleasure and what else in our strides. love, john

But the older you get time goes a little bit faster Just to make sure you know just who really is your master... Wow, excellent writing above! ! A master peice! ! Awsome writing 'As per normal' lee...xx

Hi Lee, I love your poem and the truth in it! All the best to you and yours. Hugs, Diane

*** HEY! ! ! *** Lee, Excellent write, i have to vote a *10* on this, a comments not enough!

I like the way you present the truth about life in a philosophical but, uncomplicated manner. Once again, your gift in poetry has surfaced for us to appreciate.

Love the stream of consciousness flow to this piece - it's easy on the eye and the ear and a healthy reminder about the preciousness of now. Speaking as someone who no longer has to look forward to turning the big 60, I assure you that following your passion (both in work and play) makes life thoroughly worthwhile and every new day a gift to be cherished! ! ! ! Great stylish poem. love, Allie xxxxx

Lee, I'm glad we worked through the lengthy list issues to arrive at a congenial and quite correct conclusion: it wouldn't hurt to live life like it's your passion - well stated. Rgds, Ivan