Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Hesitation Comments

Rating: 5.0

This feeling really provokes me,
because it erases the sanity&the glee.

It makes your thoughts in a strong conflict, as the harsh sea waves.
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merna ibrahim
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 November 2009

a good analysis of HESITATION! a Right&Meaningful done! a CERTAIN 10 to defeat the HESITATION/

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Cecilia Nicoletti 11 October 2009

THOUGHTFUL POEM - NICE WRITING FOR SUCH YOUNG POET- GO ON.

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p.a. noushad 31 July 2009

the life has certain meaning, it will reveal before us, must have confidence ever, i like your poem.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

Yes Merna... the hesitation... a dilemma all over, specifically in teens. Frustration defeated by significant influence until you agree for the deal… good write.. keep it up -Jaleel

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Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

it is awesome write...penned with skills

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Zeinab Sherif 22 June 2009

good job, keep it up.10marks

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Lovely craft written...meaningful one!

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good work......i enjoyed reading it......! waiting for more such beautiful poems......

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Muhammad Ali 17 June 2009

nice, simple well written! 10..

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Eyan Desir 16 June 2009

Good write................................10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 June 2009

Confidence oozing from your poem Merna! .........................a good write...............

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Kesav Easwaran 16 June 2009

Good work Merna...poignant words...gives a good message...confidence is a must to deal with situations in life...thanks...10

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Afzal Shauq 16 June 2009

it's really a good poem expressing reality with explanation of some psychological and moral characteristics in human's life... I enjoyed it much and also appreciate Merna Ibrahim for this much sweet poem...and hope she will add more poems too on regulaer bases... she got 10 +++++++++ points for this poem.... I love this stnza of her poem In certain situations, you feel hesitated and when you can't decide you feel frustrated. It needs a great confidence to defeat this feeling, But if you became decisive, you would be good at dealing

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Pushkar Bisht 16 June 2009

Great work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks Pushkar

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Lady Grace 16 June 2009

this poem is expressive..don't hesitate to display your talent..grace

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Omar Ibrahim 16 June 2009

i don't know why people hesitate....if i have to choose from two things i like, i will choose any one...it's not a problem..anyway, fantastic poem....and fantastic rhyming too.....thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 June 2009

Without hesitation i would say you have a talent as a poet.I really like the rhyme.Good job Merna.

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~ Jon London ~ 16 June 2009

We all live with this feeling daily....always torn between what the best choices are to make...we live to learn....It makes us better people in the end....But only if we fully understand and believe that the choices we make..benefit us, and those around us......great work...thanks for the share

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