This feeling really provokes me,
because it erases the sanity&the glee.
It makes your thoughts in a strong conflict, as the harsh sea waves.
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THOUGHTFUL POEM - NICE WRITING FOR SUCH YOUNG POET- GO ON.
the life has certain meaning, it will reveal before us, must have confidence ever, i like your poem.
Yes Merna... the hesitation... a dilemma all over, specifically in teens. Frustration defeated by significant influence until you agree for the deal… good write.. keep it up -Jaleel
good work......i enjoyed reading it......! waiting for more such beautiful poems......
Confidence oozing from your poem Merna! .........................a good write...............
Good work Merna...poignant words...gives a good message...confidence is a must to deal with situations in life...thanks...10
it's really a good poem expressing reality with explanation of some psychological and moral characteristics in human's life... I enjoyed it much and also appreciate Merna Ibrahim for this much sweet poem...and hope she will add more poems too on regulaer bases... she got 10 +++++++++ points for this poem.... I love this stnza of her poem In certain situations, you feel hesitated and when you can't decide you feel frustrated. It needs a great confidence to defeat this feeling, But if you became decisive, you would be good at dealing
this poem is expressive..don't hesitate to display your talent..grace
i don't know why people hesitate....if i have to choose from two things i like, i will choose any one...it's not a problem..anyway, fantastic poem....and fantastic rhyming too.....thanks for sharing.
Without hesitation i would say you have a talent as a poet.I really like the rhyme.Good job Merna.
We all live with this feeling daily....always torn between what the best choices are to make...we live to learn....It makes us better people in the end....But only if we fully understand and believe that the choices we make..benefit us, and those around us......great work...thanks for the share
a good analysis of HESITATION! a Right&Meaningful done! a CERTAIN 10 to defeat the HESITATION/