The words were perfectly turned into a weapon,
this weapon you used, killed my very best friend,
the scene was so awful, so horrible,
I persecutes me day and night,
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Yes I am referring to myself as my bestfriend... that's why the poem is called herself, myself :) thanks for reading
Written with much depth and serious emotions... To lose someone you love vilolantly is one of the worst of emotions to overcome.... But I feel, somehow, this is fabricated with creative writting which shows your beauty in your imagery..... Ana, this is good........ Bonnie
Hey Ana my dear, are you referring to yourself or did you lost a friend, a real friend because there was somebody else who broke your heart or hers? My interpretation is very strong that it's you. Your best friend is yourself. Right or wrong? Anyway, this is a very good write...it makes the reader think deeply. Warm regards,
Powerful write, Ana...to lose a friend for no fault of yours causes pain...good use of simile like- i need her/ as heart needs a beat...good piece...i liked...10
'leaving me with no clue at all of who I am? what I am here for? where am I heading to? ' hey this is exactly how i felt, after my friend lady with the iron fist left me... she used to be a great friend.. but now gone.. and used to asked the same questions from me.. who i m, ? what i m here for? every one ask such questions all the time friend... this a nice beautiful, moving write as always 10+++ with love shan