Monday, November 3, 2008

Heron Comments

Rating: 4.8

There was a heron
Standing beside a goldfish pond
Motionless and quiet
Eyeing darting fish
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Colin Ian Jeffery
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 10 November 2008

Wonderful poem, sir. It has a great depth to it. Allegories and analogies unwritten, though amazingly expressed. Thank you.

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Norah Jemal 06 November 2008

this is a really nice poem colin i like the view its set. norah

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 November 2008

A ' still hunt ' poem. Excellent use of words like ' perched upon ' and beautiful images. Well contemplated and well written.

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Sheida Saadati 04 November 2008

Fantastic! I enjoy so much from reading your beautiful poem...

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Colin Ian Jeffery

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