There was a heron
Standing beside a goldfish pond
Motionless and quiet
Eyeing darting fish
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this is a really nice poem colin i like the view its set. norah
A ' still hunt ' poem. Excellent use of words like ' perched upon ' and beautiful images. Well contemplated and well written.
Fantastic! I enjoy so much from reading your beautiful poem...
Wonderful poem, sir. It has a great depth to it. Allegories and analogies unwritten, though amazingly expressed. Thank you.