Heroic Couplet On Mending Self Comments

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Mending Self is a great done poem,10

You are dreamt In the extra merriment, You are in ecstasy Unnecessarily busy, You have no moment Even self count; excellent write

Now the time is And that will come thus, You will see surely No one helps truly, This world is cruel place For a moment it is; great shared

Mending Self we all need it for own interest, truly write

So this moment For self you do spend, Mending your mind Mending your faith, Along with worldly working Along with mending. great done,10

Each one should mend self, a great poem shared here,10

So this moment For self you do spend, Mending your mind Mending your faith, Along with worldly working Along with mending. wonderful and philosophical,10

In the extra merriment! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

▐ You are dreamt In the extra merriment, You are in ecstasy Unnecessarily busy, You have no moment Even self count;

▐▐ Hold and halt The increasing fault, Amend right now You are only you, And step the right path Along with truth;

▐▐▐ Now the time is And that will come thus, You will see surely No one helps truly, This world is cruel place For a moment it is;

▐▐▐▐ So this moment For self you do spend, Mending your mind Mending your faith, Along with worldly working Along with mending.