A Modern Talking Bird
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A modern talking bird
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(continued) .. but i'm a bit confused? i came here today following the link you sent, thinking i'd find something else, a stanza i thought you were going to write to add to this poem. maybe i'm just getting TOO OLD to remember/follow some 'things'? ? ....oh! no, it was a stanza you might write to add to one of MY POEMS! ! ha ha. i still remember how to use a spoon! bri ;)
upon reading, on 4-5-18, your message to me, dated 4-2, i have discovered this poem never went to MyPoemList; i shall have to correct that lack of 'being done'! ! (continued) ..
i DO like it. and 'how could i not like it? ? ? ? '; it is about ME! ! ! a Tribute to the beautiful brute, bri! ! yay! ! ! ME! ! I'M sure i did write you a responsive message telling you some of my observations and suggesting that, yes, you 'should' submit it to PH. i'm glad you did. to MyPoemList. bri :) (continued) ...
How much he talks! And is too hot! ! But these traits will help him to write Some big books With his wife, .......... outstanding, thanks for sharing
Great tribute to a poet in simple way, poets are generally talking bird like, otherways how they will write, thaks for sharin g the poem with us
It is simply a great tribute everybody wants ancnot do it but you have extraordinarily done, loved it and listed it
A poet to a poet, a poet is worthy of it, I like this poem as it is well composed Your usng Talking Bird is suitable, qualitative words, caz, poets are generally talkative, without it the can not write good poems, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
This tribute is properly done for a poet, a poet may have many traits in their personal lives Thanks, poet for the poem
Cont...A fantastic poem, as always. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Thank you for sharing.10
Cont... Sorry, the word should be attributes not attitudes, this technology thinks it is better than human mind sometimes, it edits works catching you unaware...... Bri, has a unique talent mixed with poetry. I hope I could see the day when he is up there on the stage doing stand up comedy mixing poetry at its finest.. Yes, I do agree he could make big books. I am sure it will sell like hot pancakes... I will be one of the FIRST BUYERS....
Proper tribute to a poet, loved it, I will also buy some books written by Bri Edwards, thanks for sharing the great poem,10
Wow, what an eye catcher title. You nailed it, Muzahidul. You captured the key attitudes of a great poet on this site. I do agree, he has a great way with words. At times, you find his words intimidating, but in the end You will find honesty in his words.
How much he talks! And is too hot! ! But these traits will help him to write
You call these heroic couplets, but they are nothing of the kind! Why do you do this? And why does this site permit this? ? ?
These two heroic couplets are in modern open / free style and not in old iambic meter
OLD: Of these the false Achitophel was first: A name to all succeeding ages cursed; For close designs and wicked counsels fit; Sagacious, bold, and turbulent of wit; Restless, unfixed in principles and place; In power unpleased, impatient of disgrace.
MODERN: A modern talking bird Is Bri Edwards, How much he talks! And is too hot! ! But these traits will help him to write Some big books With his wife,
And these modern open ones any time may be turned into iambic meter, thanks