Friday, February 6, 2009

Heroes Unknown Comments

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Sathya Narayana
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Sandra Martyres 03 May 2009

A noble write reminding us about all the unsung heroes who have left a footprint and yet remain unknown...

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Private Girl 31 March 2009

i really like this its amazing! :)

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Meera Meenakshi Sundharam 24 February 2009

I absolutely respect the fact that you not only acknowledge the famous heroes but also the fameless. It actually made me realise a lot of things. thank you for that =]

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Little Morning Star 20 February 2009

an unknown heroes.. what so mysterious is he.. a great piece..

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Allan Macli Borges 19 February 2009

i'm sure you know those heroes very well, and your gratefulness is sublime; all of us have some hero... but some times we just don't know how to show such tribute....10

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Mamta Agarwal 17 February 2009

invisible are the hands of millions of nameless, faceless who toil to make things work for us. very succinct and powerful tribute. how many realoise this... this is what i was getting at in my Haiku A fool's paradise'. you have humility and sense of gratitude and awareness of nothingness of man. 10 Mamta

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Raj Nandy 13 February 2009

Sathyaji, your poem makes me to remember those lines - many a beautiful flower blooms by the wayside unseen, to waste its fragrance in the desert air! But the sacrifices made by those dedicated people must have earned them a place within His divine fold! - Raj Nandy

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sir. I applaud you on this. I too would be immortal.

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Allysyn Bryant 12 February 2009

wow. nice write.

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Ency Bearis 12 February 2009

great theme..wonderful write...

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rago rago 12 February 2009

A true version and painted in good words.

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Allan Macli Borges 10 February 2009

there's love in these lines. and grateful. even unknown to the others those heroes you know very well and show us the much you appreciate them in beautiful verses. 10 for you my friend. allan macli

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Angie Melby 09 February 2009

i loved it good job i agree with Gargi saha 10++

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Gargi Saha 08 February 2009

A lovely poem. U get 10++.........

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Aijaz Asif 08 February 2009

very beautiful write bhayya and who said those Heroes are unknown cause as long as people like you are here in between us, they always be remembered...thanks 10+++++ and A++++ rgds asif

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 February 2009

wonderful. a gr8 theme, and pleasant rendition, sir. thank you.

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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

heroes unsung............nice theme...well thought out...well penned..if only everyone had a grateful heart like u do......

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Sandra Fowler 07 February 2009

Nothing that is good true or beautiful is ever really lost. Unknown heroes affect eternity even thogh history does not record their names. Your place in the future scheme of things has not yet been decided. Take heart and, by all means, keep on writing. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

I agree with everything that Ravi A said. He said it better than I ever could. So, I shall not repeat it. I shall only add that the value of every man is measured in the sum total of all mankind. You either add or subtract from that total. GW62

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Ravi A 07 February 2009

I went through your short biography. I really admire you for the views that a true poet should maintain. I too am of the same principle. We should always give only positivsm to the society. In that sense, you a doing a great job with your pen. This poem is a nice work. All heroes will go unsung one day. Individual names will be forgotten but civilizations will continue to receive the benefits of individual effort. That is important. Every man has a purpose here on earth and his views and works are absorbed by the world. Thus, a singer continues to enthrall the world with his songs, a poet with his poems and so on. Efforts will not go into a waste. You may go through my works and comment.

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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