Monday, April 6, 2015

Hero Par Excellence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grinding roar of ear deafening tone
Hair rousing creaky monster wheels
Rumble ‘n roll over on earth griping lugs
Quivering palms watch, sans anything else to do
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Roseann Shawiak 10 April 2015

A very intense and amazing story of a lone hero, sacrificing his own life for so many others. Gut wrenching poem, explaining the whole ordeal, it must have been a very scary time for all those people. Thank God for one man who never thought of himself, just his fellow man. Such a powerful description of war up close. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2015

Ear defending tone comes with roar from far and w hear with eager waiting. The young soldier still thinks and realizes terrific appearance. Wonderfully drafted and shared really.10.

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Valsa George 09 April 2015

Such daring.... such self sacrificing love.... will definitely make any one adorable! Unfortunately that young soldier got blasted out by the enemy's shower of bullets! The freedom of any country is got and sustained by the valour and blood of how many such known and unknown heroes! Let us bow our heads in reverence before these great martyrs! A moving story and a powerfulwrite!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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