Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Hero In Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

My soul is feeling extremely blue,
so blue as the azure-hued sky.
Seemingly devoid of any hope, only despair in it lies.
The light unseen, only the pain seems real.
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Godfrey Morris
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Kenebo Rajkumar 10 May 2012

its called a true poetry, terrific one!

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Kenebo Rajkumar 10 May 2012

its called a true poetry, terrific one!

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Calico Jack 09 May 2012

Nice imagery pal, there's not a bad thing to say about this poem besides that the rhythm is a bit off. P.S. do your friends call you God for short?

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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