My soul is feeling extremely blue, 
so blue as the azure-hued sky.
Seemingly devoid of any hope, only despair in it lies.
The light unseen, only the pain seems real.
                
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Nice imagery pal, there's not a bad thing to say about this poem besides that the rhythm is a bit off. P.S. do your friends call you God for short?

 
                     
                
its called a true poetry, terrific one!