Saturday, September 23, 2006

Hermit And A Sleeping Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was mesmerized by her leer
and he cannot take his eyes away.
She never let him go to his hermitage
and he feels like strangulation.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Joseph Daly 24 September 2006

A cynical view of life my friend. Written so well and with such mastery that anything is forgiven. The logical flow of this poem is great; containing a humour that is never far from the eye.

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Sandra Fowler 24 September 2006

In life there are many questions, but very few answers. Very thought provoking, Nimal. Sandra

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G. Murdock 23 September 2006

The irony of domestic life. Great sketch Nimal. I've been in prison for 39 years, she calls it home.

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