Thursday, January 27, 2011

Here To Stay Comments

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I look at you looking at me.
Feels like a feeling meant to be.
And as your hand moves with mine.
It's like I'm lifted out of time.
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Anna Petrashishina
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Anna Petrashishina 08 February 2011

whether its good or bad, don't be shy, give me a reply :) God bless!

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Malaya Roses 02 February 2011

The poetess finally found him with pure love after so long been waiting & wanting as written in this line: 'It's like I've waited all my life so I can be with you. Narration of love with a beautiful conclusion. Keep writing.

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