Here, Now, Tonight Comments

Gossamer threads of gold ……….when I chase after the music; that’s infused in every line, I’m left breathless by the beauty of thought! This poem may perhaps break me free from this solitary confinement of in expression that has plagued me for over a year now.

WOW... I held my breath as i read this poem...it was beautifully written and took me to that place where you were

oh wow, i've read a no. of your poems and each and everyone of them is astounding...i'm quite speechless...

Masterful love poem. Quite awesome. A unique take on a lovely theme and a lovely poem as well.

A delightful write Christine, delightful word picture. Best, Jerry

lovely syle & elegance - sensual - it arouses all the 5 senses, mildly cunning. made me feel guilty to breathe.you, you good.

The poem breathes out its passion with a kind of exaltation; the reader is enraptured. Thanks.

My friend this a vivid bit of angst, passionately executed! Excellent.

Christine, Brilliant. Your words connect love and longing and longing for love. Thank you for your comment on my poem. I will watch for you.

This is a beautiful example of free verse and a wonderful poem. 'Would regret slip in and steal the air? ' is really lovely. My breath seems stolen away quite often and I do understand this poem. Good work. Raynette