Here Lies The Success Comments

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Ultra Violet Who canbring shine in ablackhole? Not everyone is still in heaven.

I like the theory Nathan Gionet1 minute ago Wording is ok, could improve...reminds me of sport Comment +1 Honestly, I'm struggling with this a bit...

David LekichLess than a minute ago The language and rhythm is a bit disjointed. I think you last stanza encapsulates your message, but the prior stanzas lack consistency and focus. The theme of rising above adversity and being the better for it is universal; give this another shot- your passion is evident and your effort to be commended.

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