Thursday, May 23, 2019

Here Is Happiness For Me Comments

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Preferred toy in hand, playing,
In mother's lap and smiling,
To her lullaby listening,
Eyes on Ma, succumbs to sleep,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 June 2019

A nice trip down the memory lane revisiting fond remembrances about the most liked events in different stages of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 June 2019

Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik for the feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 May 2019

I thank the three poets for their excellent comments. But I do not know if they know Gujarati, transliteration of which is given along. No doubt the poem is great. Yet, my contribution is only the translation. Can any one comment on translation? I invite poets who can read/understand Gujarati.

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Bharati Nayak 25 May 2019

Yes, meaning of happiness differs from people to people.Even for the same person the definition changes from time to time.What is happiness to baby is different from a young man in love. A fantastic write, thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 May 2019

Thanks indeed, Bharati Nayak I agree with you on what you say about happiness.

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A beautiful poem that expresses in detail how happiness can be derived in small things. Although happiness is subjective, majority if not all could relate to all the circumstances stated.in this beautiful poem and they all bring utmost joy and happiness. Excellently crafted and executed.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 May 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, a superb poem no doubt, the question is: how is the translation.

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Valsa George 23 May 2019

The different stages of life starting from infancy to mature adulthood are beautifully described! Each stage has its own thrills. As a baby, one feels happy in the protective embrace of the mother. As a child attending school, occasional bunking of class and enjoying the sun and rain is thrilling. As a teenager, finding one's love is an excitement. Finally getting settled with wife and kids is the culmination of happiness, A great summing of the various stages of life!

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 May 2019

Thank you Valsa George for the feedback. You have an eye to see what is not said expressly.

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