Thursday, February 26, 2015

Here Is A Woman Deceived In Love Comments

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The toy is now broken,
And you have come once again,
For a new play,
But I love you,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 27 February 2015

Many women are lured into love and finally deceived! They are like broken toys! Once broken, no body is interested in her and is sadly discarded! Very poignant!

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Rajnish Manga 26 February 2015

The feelings of a woman's broken heart have been translated so well in this poem. It impacts those who unleash atrocity on innocent and hapless women in society. I would like to quote the concluding lines which are explosive: I have already written a verse for the grave / Here is a woman deceived in love!

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 February 2015

The poem is heart touching and a guide for the girls.................10

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