Friday, June 26, 2009
Here Is A River, Here Is A Lake, Jump In And See My Latest Mistake Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Please help me
The stars are falling
I cannot wish upon them all
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Seairra Kyger
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Angelic Warrior
26 June 2009
very nice....but i don't really think the title fits.....this poem has depth and is a good read...but i don't think that the title really demonstrates what it beholds....that would be the only thing i would change.....truly a good piece :)
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7/18/2025 5:10:43 PM # 1.0.0
Seairra what a well penned piece of poetry, keep it up