Here, in this beautiful moment,
slipping away from the world -
steeped in this glorious season,
shackles of earth now unfurled.
...
Read full text
Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read
Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read
A wonderful poem, sometimes we need the peace of silence, nothing but calm.
Beautiful Val, the description of a moment in time....and a new beginning with much reason and rhyme! I also wrote another poem for you for your birthday~ hope you like it.....{{{hugs}}} and blessings always
Shackles of earth now unfurled and touching the dreams you have found...... I feel this is a second beginning! Beautiful write, Valerie! Enjoyed much!
Shackles of earth now unfurled rising............in the star-sequined night Wonderful expression carrying a distinct Valerie imprint. closing my eyes to all sadness touching the dreams I have found Nice to see you closing the poem on a positive note.
A beautiful, wonderful expression of deep spiritual peace. So soothing.
Dear Valerie. You have made me feel like you have written these most beautiful words..... Just for ME! ...OMG. So thank you for that. Bless you on January 13thxxxx
A wonderful poem, Val. I love the great talent you display in all of your poems. They are full of feeling and so touchable by the reader. Excellent. I wish you all the best for this new year,2015.
Another very beautiful poem Valerie. What exactly you are describing here I'm not sure. The moments before you drift off to sleep, some kind of paranormal levitation, a swan song? Whatever it is it makes wonderful reading. It's the best poem I've read for a long while.
Life does give us sometimes these mysterious moments of undemanded ecstasy, of dreamlike pleasure beyond all logic. They are rare, but they are the best. I think that in this lovely poem it is that that you so beautifully expressed and also made the reader feel. Only a very sensitive poet can do this.
Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing. Excellently expressed my friend. I will add this to my list of poems.