Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Here, In This Beautiful Moment Comments

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Here, in this beautiful moment,
slipping away from the world -
steeped in this glorious season,
shackles of earth now unfurled.
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Valerie Dohren
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Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing. Excellently expressed my friend. I will add this to my list of poems.

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Paul Brookes 01 May 2015

just beautiful perfection thanks great read BB

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2015

Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2015

Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read

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Meena Mustafa 06 February 2015

Wow! another lovely poem Val.

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Mary Forrester 20 January 2015

A beautiful poem Valerie and with a positive vibe.

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Dave Walker 16 January 2015

A wonderful poem, sometimes we need the peace of silence, nothing but calm.

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Dee Corpolongo 11 January 2015

Beautiful Val, the description of a moment in time....and a new beginning with much reason and rhyme! I also wrote another poem for you for your birthday~ hope you like it.....{{{hugs}}} and blessings always

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Valsa George 11 January 2015

Shackles of earth now unfurled and touching the dreams you have found...... I feel this is a second beginning! Beautiful write, Valerie! Enjoyed much!

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Om Chawla 09 January 2015

Shackles of earth now unfurled rising............in the star-sequined night Wonderful expression carrying a distinct Valerie imprint. closing my eyes to all sadness touching the dreams I have found Nice to see you closing the poem on a positive note.

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Smoky Hoss 09 January 2015

A beautiful, wonderful expression of deep spiritual peace. So soothing.

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Lyn Paul 09 January 2015

Dear Valerie. You have made me feel like you have written these most beautiful words..... Just for ME! ...OMG. So thank you for that. Bless you on January 13thxxxx

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

A wonderful poem, Val. I love the great talent you display in all of your poems. They are full of feeling and so touchable by the reader. Excellent. I wish you all the best for this new year,2015.

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Jak Black 07 January 2015

Another very beautiful poem Valerie. What exactly you are describing here I'm not sure. The moments before you drift off to sleep, some kind of paranormal levitation, a swan song? Whatever it is it makes wonderful reading. It's the best poem I've read for a long while.

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Sandra Feldman 06 January 2015

Life does give us sometimes these mysterious moments of undemanded ecstasy, of dreamlike pleasure beyond all logic. They are rare, but they are the best. I think that in this lovely poem it is that that you so beautifully expressed and also made the reader feel. Only a very sensitive poet can do this.

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