Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Here I'M Alone Comments

Rating: 4.9

I don’t know why I like to talk with you
In your language
Why I can’t withdraw my fingers from the keys
Till I finished the page;
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Anil Kumar Panda
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David Wood 15 March 2024

Life at time seems to be an enigma wrapped in a puzzle surrounded in a mystery, but we all have to keep moving forward with our hopes and dreams. Top marks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 March 2024

Bravo Anil Thank U for sharing

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Rob Lamberton 15 March 2024

Not so alone…I think love has eluded many.

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priscah Mutswenje 14 June 2023

I love this poem. It actually molds what love is

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me poet yeps poet 13 May 2021

5 stars u love a frsh one for every date why for another fresh bottle wait updatemate

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2020

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts Though much I try to leave them behind. Great expressions on the reality of love. a fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2020

Why do I always fall prey to your childlike charm And believe your words When I see you staring at me from inside the glass My thoughts collapse as a tower of cards wonderful poetic expressions my dear poet Tiku. to ny

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Sachidananda Panda 26 July 2020

Repentance and rejection... move together, hand in hand... a beautiful poem... Thanks

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Rajendran Muthiah 22 June 2020

The lover gives up his love and wishes that she should marry someone who is more suitable. That is great.

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

A well written poem that stands tall. Thank you for your comments.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 August 2019

Thanks for support and have a blessed day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

love and love through the life, entire life drives a feeling of loneliness in crowd /// beautiful poem

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 June 2019

Yeah you are right Sir. Thanks for reading and comment.

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One to whom love is denied will feel lonely. The poet's attempt to bring the fact to light is successful. " Know I well I won’t ever get you, and your love Is not in my fate" separate words. So touchingly you have written....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 March 2019

Thanks very much Sir for reading and giving wonderful comment. Feeling inspired.

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Susheela Shiju 13 January 2019

beautifully penned! 10+++

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 January 2019

Thanks for giving time. Gratitude.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

Your questions have no answers with me And you ask them so often I tried and failed to come out from web of love That around me you have spun...so touching and impressive. this is a beautiful poem on love having haunting expression. Thank you dear poet for sharing this gem.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 January 2019

That is a very beautiful comment sir. My heartfelt gratitude.

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2018

i'm glad i read my earlier comment, as once again i did not understand (at first) your reference to keys and glass! ! i found this in MyPoemList and now plan to put it into my Sept. showcase of PH poems, this month highlighting poems from poets of 'the Indian subcontinent'. thanks in advance. bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2018

Lovely poem. Love that is unfulfilled is something that envelops the mind and haunts more than anything else. Really powerful and expressive poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 February 2018

Thanks for reading and giving comment. Inspired. Heartfelt gratitude.

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Tom Allport 30 June 2017

a lovely poem of the act of falling in love........that cannot be? ...............wonderfully written.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 February 2018

Yeah. Thanks for giving time Sir. Appreciated.

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Bri Edwards 09 March 2017

Why I can’t withdraw my fingers from the keys..........i was thinking keys? house or car keys? ? then it dawned on me: computer keyboard keys i guess. and When I see you staring at me from inside the glass ........glass is monitor glass? ? at first i thought you might be in love with a lizard in a terrarium! favorite lines (stanza) : The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts Though much I try to leave them behind ............you think of such golden lines as you dig ore from mines? ? too late for whom, i wonder. i don't care much for 'love' poems, but this one goes to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 February 2018

Honored for such a wonderful review. My regards.

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Rajnish Manga 05 January 2017

Enjoyed reading this poem. It not only reflects the love of two young hearts but brings about their innocent doubts and questions, too. It also makes provision for flexibility in the relationships. Very well articulated poem. Thank a lot. The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind I tried and failed to come out from web of love That around me you have spun

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 January 2017

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind., ... is the best line for me too. I don't know how it came to mind. Thanks for reading and comment Sir. Regards.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2016

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind..........love and its problems. truth, faithfulness and lies. that is life. you have portrayed it so well in your poem. thank you dear poet

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