Here I'M Alone Comments

Life at time seems to be an enigma wrapped in a puzzle surrounded in a mystery, but we all have to keep moving forward with our hopes and dreams. Top marks.

Bravo Anil Thank U for sharing

Not so alone…I think love has eluded many.

I love this poem. It actually molds what love is

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The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts Though much I try to leave them behind. Great expressions on the reality of love. a fine poem. tony

Why do I always fall prey to your childlike charm And believe your words When I see you staring at me from inside the glass My thoughts collapse as a tower of cards wonderful poetic expressions my dear poet Tiku. to ny

Repentance and rejection... move together, hand in hand... a beautiful poem... Thanks

The lover gives up his love and wishes that she should marry someone who is more suitable. That is great.

A well written poem that stands tall. Thank you for your comments.

love and love through the life, entire life drives a feeling of loneliness in crowd /// beautiful poem

One to whom love is denied will feel lonely. The poet's attempt to bring the fact to light is successful. " Know I well I won’t ever get you, and your love Is not in my fate" separate words. So touchingly you have written....10

beautifully penned! 10+++

Your questions have no answers with me And you ask them so often I tried and failed to come out from web of love That around me you have spun...so touching and impressive. this is a beautiful poem on love having haunting expression. Thank you dear poet for sharing this gem.10

i'm glad i read my earlier comment, as once again i did not understand (at first) your reference to keys and glass! ! i found this in MyPoemList and now plan to put it into my Sept. showcase of PH poems, this month highlighting poems from poets of 'the Indian subcontinent'. thanks in advance. bri :)

Lovely poem. Love that is unfulfilled is something that envelops the mind and haunts more than anything else. Really powerful and expressive poem.

a lovely poem of the act of falling in love........that cannot be? ...............wonderfully written.

Why I can’t withdraw my fingers from the keys..........i was thinking keys? house or car keys? ? then it dawned on me: computer keyboard keys i guess. and When I see you staring at me from inside the glass ........glass is monitor glass? ? at first i thought you might be in love with a lizard in a terrarium! favorite lines (stanza) : The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts Though much I try to leave them behind ............you think of such golden lines as you dig ore from mines? ? too late for whom, i wonder. i don't care much for 'love' poems, but this one goes to MyPoemList. bri :)

Enjoyed reading this poem. It not only reflects the love of two young hearts but brings about their innocent doubts and questions, too. It also makes provision for flexibility in the relationships. Very well articulated poem. Thank a lot. The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind I tried and failed to come out from web of love That around me you have spun

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind..........love and its problems. truth, faithfulness and lies. that is life. you have portrayed it so well in your poem. thank you dear poet