Here I Go Again Comments

Life is like that, and love, and emotions, being human and all that. Embrace curves! ! ! In the road of life!

Poems set images I think. And you do that. Yet there goes more to it. For example one could write a paragraph in prose, then chop it up and make these many words that line, and these many words the next line... and rate it a poem. I do not think that is enough. The near total lack of punctuation is also an excuse for ease of writing. The idea is good but I do not think your arrangement of imagery works as well it might.