Here I Am (2nd Version) Comments

Such an inspirational message. The first half of this strikes me as the reminder of what it means to be together....the power of more than one. The poem then reveals what happens when those bonds dwindle or forgetfulness sets in....only to end on the reminder of the power of togetherness. As has been observed.....'truly uplifting', Soul.

It is a beautiful poem on love where a lover has plea to beloved to continue reciprocation. He says with many examples. Let be quote some.. Dont compare moon with sun Should i remind you Night absence if sun presence There's no use to compare the light As the moonlight derived from original sunshine So dont hide behind the clouds, give your spirit shine Dont tell me the moon comfort behind the clouds Your hidden potential will unleashes secret proud Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful poem, life often has a lot of pain and hurt along it's path.

Open and free your hand! For i am around to help. Thanks for sharing.

Endearing encouragement with sworn-to loyalty. Gratifying, truly heartwarming work, Soul.

Superb innovation.Simply hallmark poetry.Brian Adams must have been jealous of this have had he known.Well written once again.

You writing is amazing! ! 'Never give up Just climb barrier wall Never think of how tall Trust me, will catch anytime if u fall'... Too good. Good Luck :)