Here I Am Comments

Stunning work in this poem 'I am' is very powerful and the end is excellent ++++++10 Regards your doing fine uavanice1

Let me fly among the stars Let me dance through flowers newly born Make me feel the sun shine on my shoulders For never have I felt freedom like this before.......................... .yet angel feels all by the freedom freedom soul aswhn transmute by the redemption..............beauty divine parades in paradise, yet it never falls, wopnderful write ingenious by imagery curving the shadow by reaslity,10++++, thanks for sharing

Rising from the ashes to strength and dignity. CP

Great work Martine. N

I rose to be free and within the fire in my soul I am burning for this life I have chosen To be free of the spell you put me under best way imagery pinned from real stow of life