Tuesday, December 10, 2019

Here Hope Desires Me Comments

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Here the I am
into me alive
for the next breath
from the lungs
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 December 2019

Earth! ! Breath, Bread of life! Desire, Wisdom is the key. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2019

An excellent piece. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

'here the hope desires a rose where I'm the bud and the fragrance is YOU to live alongside shaped to unshaped' - I love the poetic beauty of this stanza! This is really a wonderful poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 December 2019

That was incomplete thanks to PH.. Those were beautiful lines indeed, but are the only, originality reveals everywhere, brilliant work of penmanship

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 December 2019

here the hope desires a rose where I'm the bud and the fragrance is YOU

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yoonoos peerbocus 10 December 2019

interesting and original in many ways

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2019

An excellent poem! Elegant last stanza....liked it....10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 December 2019

this is nice but you missed out purposely i c on the main organs of delivery u do daily see ur poetry of course is lovey l mb of bd

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