Here Hope Desires Me Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Here Hope Desires Me

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Here the I am
into me alive
for the next breath
from the lungs

here my blood circulation
step by step circling
into my body
for every next second

here my eyes absorb
the visible sight
to cross the present
and the ears hear saliently all
to gain the processing of thoughtful journey

here I'm alive within me
for the hope

here
o the hope desires all me
and makes alive
from the dark rider night to the light breeding shining sun

o the hope desires heartiest
to bring me into the shape of rejuvenated spring
after the biting cold winter

here the hope desires
a rose where
I'm the bud and the fragrance is YOU
to live alongside shaped to unshaped



-December 10,2019 Chattogram

Tuesday, December 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: self discovery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
yoonoos peerbocus 10 December 2019

interesting and original in many ways

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 December 2019

this is nice but you missed out purposely i c on the main organs of delivery u do daily see ur poetry of course is lovey l mb of bd

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2019

An excellent poem! Elegant last stanza....liked it....10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 December 2019

Earth! ! Breath, Bread of life! Desire, Wisdom is the key. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2019

An excellent piece. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

'here the hope desires a rose where I'm the bud and the fragrance is YOU to live alongside shaped to unshaped' - I love the poetic beauty of this stanza! This is really a wonderful poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 December 2019

That was incomplete thanks to PH.. Those were beautiful lines indeed, but are the only, originality reveals everywhere, brilliant work of penmanship

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 December 2019

here the hope desires a rose where I'm the bud and the fragrance is YOU

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