Tuesday, June 11, 2019

Here Goes A Beggar Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I came to this world,
Born was I a free bird—
Worry was there nor yet a let,
Easy were my needs met.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 June 2019

A great analysis of transformation of an innocent kid with minimum needs into a greedy beggar boy due to inherent foes like greed, , envy, anger etc gifted by God beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.10 points. Regards.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik for visiting my poem and appreciating it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2019

This is really a beautiful poem on greed and beggar having impressive expression with broad outlook. I love the most lines are....And hungry I hardly went— Mother's milk enough He sent; Variety of food He sent with, I grew when pearly white set of teeth TFS.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Yes Kumarmani Mahakul these lines seem to stand out as compared to others. Thanks for your evaluation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2019

A wonderful and perceptive poem, Sir. A great observation on human character. Man's desires will never cease. There is no contentment in life. A unique write to convey wisdom. Masterfully written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for your appreciation

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2019

Greed is the greatest enemy of a man...the contented man is the happiest man on the earth! Simply one needs to control his/her desire to the extent possible! An insightful piece of work sir....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

I agree with you, Dr swain and thanks for visiting my poem.

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