Monday, May 11, 2015

Here Comes The Sun Comments

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It’s been raining non-stop,
Grey clouds squeezing drops.
One by one it falls
On my head but no umbrella do I hold.
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Abby Sze
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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Intense poem, can feel the worriedness you feel for your brother, feeling scared, hoping he is alright. Then giving a ray of sunshine with your last line. Another excellent poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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