Saturday, December 2, 2017

Here Comes The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day ends and collecting scattered sunlight,
Colors smile, on guitar of air fragrances dance
Whispers of love I listen to in a red rose light
Parting day kisses evening for a night romance.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 14 December 2017

The point of intersection between day and night is a beautiful time when sky wears a costume of multi shades and only a poet can describe it so beautifully!

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Indira Renganathan 08 December 2017

A poem on nature and a poem on love too...your usual excellent write...thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

Interesting write. Stunning expression. Beautiful poem with beautiful picture. Enjoyed.

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 December 2017

What a poem, reading it I was put in a trance........................................

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Beauty of desk is beyond words... Well penned

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2017

Reminds me of the song HERE COMES THE NIGHT popularized by BARRY MANILOW on the 80s... a huge 10++++

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George Krokos 02 December 2017

A very enjoyable read, well done.

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