Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Here Comes Again The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here comes the night again,
late on I'll be carrrying myself to sleep then.
But before, i know I'll think of you again,
asking, 'This feeling will fade when? '
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rhona fabi
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 November 2009

i can see that famous people here in poemhunter appreciates this. Well i think it's also good. But may you find the heat of summer during cold nights.

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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

a wonderful simile...a nice self-contemplation..good write and rhymes...10

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Ramesh T A 01 August 2009

Sure, the kite will carry your feeling to the destination in your dreams!

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Kee Thampi 31 July 2009

Wish you will never blame me, when nothing but a lover is what I can be. I am badly hurt can't you ever see? nicely written poem

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