Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Here At The Bar Comments

Rating: 3.1

here at the bar
with my wine
with myself
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John Kipling Lewis
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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Simple, yet to the point. I like it but I just couldn't call it a 10 and I am not sure why.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

5. It's a good start. There are some details. Just work on making them stronger and more striking.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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