Saturday, June 7, 2008

Here Are My Tears Comments

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Here are my tears
I give you as pearls
Long fully years
That through time hurls
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Peter S. Quinn
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 June 2008

I'm a rhythm and rhyme poet, so I appreciate the rhymed words. These were good rhymes but I thought some were rather weak for the poem and it suffered because of it. GW62

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