Here Comments

the title drew me 'Here'-first I want to say thanks for your comment on 'A Mother's Choice'.The words to poem rubs and irritates my heart-but the tone of the poem soothes at end.I look around and wonder why you are not 'Here' [ but] life goes on although it walks a very fine line' I could feel the tone of every word to this poem, the structure gently handled your words keeping them, moving flowing to the last word in the poem! a 10

after you are gone the world's gonna be alone a fine line it shall tread too donno what it shall do without YOU

Zindagi migzara...life goes on..I agree w u...ur peoms are so deep in their meanings and strong in their sensivity that one can only wonder...

GOOD! It's awful to lose the person whom you love so much. may nobody experience such trials!

a very touching poem. keep your faith, dear. well-written and well-expressed emotion! 10-)