Here I am in the garden laughing
an old woman with heavy breasts
and a nicely mapped face
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Sweetest and loveliest poem I ever read. Honesty and Love made this gem.5 Stars TOP Marks. Congrats being chosen by Poem Hunter as The Modern Poem Of The Day
Congratulations for having got the MPOTD. Thank you for sharing
How loveliest said is this poem, so sweetly rendered.5 Full Stars for this lovely poem, a peaceful sphere created in her words and a satisfactorily atmosphere. Thank you for sharing, and most deserving poem chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day
Who wouldn't want to be Grace Paley? An old woman able to look back at a full life of activism: laying down on fifth avenue in NY to block a military parade during a war, climbing fences to protest weapons of mass destruction, being investigated by the FBI and labelled a " communist" .
Absolutely love this unexpected piece of sheer unadulterated joy-in-life poetry! It makes me want to meet the wonderful woman in this poem! ! ! I have to treasure this!
Feelings are personal; Intimate and genuine; Thoughts are natural, fresh and candid; Meaning is profound and touching; Picture painted with all that is simply superb. Congrats for being the POD. X
Silly me. I'm in tears. What a perfectly formed piece of writing. I could see this picture so clearly and wanted to step in and smile. This is how poetry should be. Uncontrived, honest, beautifully put, welcoming, intimate and with a twist at the end to gather a smile.
Here is a beautiful poem of love and it is so interesting.The old age the beauty of life all is nice.
This is the love sitting on the old and bulky branch cooing and oozing love so nice
Here I am now looking forward to retirement after reading this poem.
Just perfect......this sets the scene in my minds eye of my past and future in equal measures.....wonderful...
So natural and sincere one feels the poet's sensations very close and very clear.A lovely piece! .