Saturday, August 29, 2009

Her World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon on the river,
shadows in the trees,
whispers from the rushes,
echo on the breeze,
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Laurie hill
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 September 2009

Your poems have a natural beauty which seems effortless, perfectly encapsulating the subject matter. This is another winner

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Sonya Florentino 29 August 2009

beautiful imagery...rivers separate people, bridges connect, but I guess you cannot cross over unless she meets you half-way...

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Smiley Hooker 29 August 2009

You're very poetic, my friend...lovely! :)

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Pink Butterfly ... 29 August 2009

Wonderfully written piece! ! ! It flows so beautifully.... Fantastic rhyming! ! ! Keep it up! -Pink Butterfly-

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