Monday, July 2, 2007

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Spreads them proudly across her bed
Fills her mind with words, tender
Moistened kisses, sloppy
Good-byes and all the men she
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Lorene Kinsey
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Alison Cassidy 03 July 2007

I like this one. Perhaps it is the sloppy kisses and the goodbyes, but you have brought her to life disarmingly in this piece about memories and men. Lovely piece. Allie xxxx

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