Friday, September 7, 2012

Her Words Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have found myself to wonder
Will my dark dreams tear me asunder

What be it that causes this burning in my soul
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Vasto Grom
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Richard Wlodarski 11 August 2022

There is a bittersweet love to the mysteriousness of this beautiful poem. Congratulations, Vasto on a well deserved POD!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 March 2017

The secret kept long hidden in mind. Heartiest congrats on the poem of the Day.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 March 2017

In the dark recesses Of the powerful mind Shines a light Ever so faint Congrats on Poem Of The Day

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 March 2017

Love and passion, desire to come close and longing to go away at the same time. This is nice poem and Congrats.

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Bharati Nayak 12 March 2017

The speaker expresses a desire to break away from temptation- - -It is a well written poem, thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 12 March 2017

a poem with a voice that calls out your name? well written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 March 2017

Sweet and serene voice... congrats on being picked...

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2017

There is fascination and there is kind of repulsion- both at the same time. Go ahead and free yourself of this predicament. Don't fall prey to temptations bur one must also recognize real things of beauty that bring joy to the heart. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 March 2017

I will fall but how long? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Vasto Grom

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