Her Whiskey Mind Comments

A fire burns her peace She wants to be the deep She heard noises in every breath The noises of her thoughts. beautiful. picturing the pain and struggle of loneliness. thank u dear poetess. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Rohma. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

Perhaps she loves deeply her parents, friends, and acquaintances, but she is not getting back the same deep love in return. She feels lonely and needs more attention and love. Whatever it may but she has nicely penned his sentiments and feelings in a wonderful poem. I congratulate her for writing and sharing such an amazing poem.

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Deep feelings of sadness that accompanies loneliness is aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Rohma.

If everything is going right, the tears in her eyes must be tears of happiness! Welcome to Poem Hunter!